Post-production

So today is Thursday, almost the end of the first week back. Today was our first chance to get into the editing suite and come back to our films.
Callum edited as me and Jake sort of directed him. We have now gone back and are sticking to Final Cut Pro! WHEY

Fairnie took a look at our footage and made a few (amusing) suggestions :)
Jake kindly wrote down a list for us of things to do, I also added abit ^_^

Things to do
Establish things such as WHY does our character feel the need to work?
Make film more edgy and fast
Include shots of eyes inbetween reading or shakey hands to go with manic leg movement
Sort out music
Voiceover! - My thoughts: "I want a sausage roll", random words perhaps revelent to photography such as: contrast, framing, (a play on words because these things are revelent to film, perhaps expand this)
& also other people's point of view: "Everytime I see her.." etc.